tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post4891394238426768392..comments2024-03-15T14:23:29.857+07:00Comments on Yukkuri Free Time Literature Service: Our New World - Bridge1-2 Part G1Yukkuri Oniisanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09604990645032069309noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-69483204658776042542017-04-07T18:47:10.051+07:002017-04-07T18:47:10.051+07:00Cheers!Cheers!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02779714756510051343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-87071647410488897872017-01-18T03:23:56.263+07:002017-01-18T03:23:56.263+07:00Большое спасибо!
"theentire"
"aft...Большое спасибо!<br /><br />"theentire"<br /><br />"after he joined"<br />I think "she".<br /><br />"She could do much in housework, ..."<br />I think "do NOT much".<br /><br />"And at the end, of the day..." --> "And at the end of the day"<br /><br />Maybe "bellies" --> "belly" ?<br />Art :)noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-30346762785163273262016-08-25T21:43:11.738+07:002016-08-25T21:43:11.738+07:00Well I understand that I am mostly like you too.
I...Well I understand that I am mostly like you too.<br />I just want to remind that characters have 'emotions' part too. They won't always be rational or competent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-50540032292254100662016-08-25T21:11:02.910+07:002016-08-25T21:11:02.910+07:00On the summoner, yeah I guess less informed solo p...On the summoner, yeah I guess less informed solo player would view it like that. I just found it odd to call it trash.<br /><br />Not just unpopular, too hard, too tedious, or too depandant, but a trash like they don't even aware of its worth.BLKCandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06922111252078601670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-13483461134998876092016-08-25T20:57:32.214+07:002016-08-25T20:57:32.214+07:00Well yeah. That's true. I shouldn't worded...Well yeah. That's true. I shouldn't worded it like that.<br /><br />I didn't want to suggest any change on how they should act, just wanted to point out character flaws and conflict as seen currently. <br /><br />Characters should have flaws and conflicts. Those are what make them interesting. I'm rather interested in how these conflicts will develop or resolve.<br /><br />Though I admit I do want to see someone scold Kiyomi. "You are being possessive of someone you don't possess!" or something like that lol.BLKCandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06922111252078601670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-81650380643280830982016-08-25T20:49:23.227+07:002016-08-25T20:49:23.227+07:00I will not commenting about Kiyomi. I left the int...I will not commenting about Kiyomi. I left the interpretation to the readers.<br /><br />About summoner being a trash job: <br />That's why a senior player like Yuuto know the value of a summoner. A summoner is highly dependable to other people. Although the summon is strong and very versatile, Summoner was relatively weak. Left alone, they would quickly die. Their stats growth are also crappy. So a Summoner are highly depending on their summons and other players, they would stay at the back while commanding their summons (imagine the first Digimon World [PSX] battle). They are really not a job for solo players.<br />Just face it, how many players do you think want to play as a Summoner when highly independent and flashy DPS job like a Magician or Knight are around and you can even combine these job and behave as a Magic Swordsman?<br />Why choose Summoner when there are other jobs that had smaller demerits while not detrimental to your independence?<br />So for a casual players, Summoner is a Trash-tier job. Veteran players know better. A mature Summoner are a force to be reckoned with. After all, they brought friends into a fight.Yukkuri Oniisanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09604990645032069309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-16211083027476941992016-08-25T20:18:33.737+07:002016-08-25T20:18:33.737+07:00He didn't meld her, he advised her like a seni...He didn't meld her, he advised her like a senior player. There is no positive for him in that nor he is trying to make her useful like you said.<br /><br />From the in-story time, reality and game mixing is like 10+ days. I am only counting what happen after without the monitor screen separating them.<br /><br />Kiyomi is a girl in love lost in her happiness but at the same time she intend to make it real. <br />Yusis is a guy who is happy as long as she is happy. If there are any problem that come from this relationship it is more of Yusis fault for not stopping. Beside I doubt any problem would come from this unless Yusis fall in love with other girl. <br /><br />Mayana is planning to so your point is moot. <br />Girls can sense other girls who is planing to make a move on your beloved. They are scary like that. <br /><br />Whatever, Your views have SB competence on it which is probably why it trigger me. Criticizing is fine, disliking characters is fine but I dislike 'how character should act' words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-4346622566997914332016-08-25T20:01:01.568+07:002016-08-25T20:01:01.568+07:00BTW, melding other character build to supplement y...BTW, melding other character build to supplement your team is something very common in MMORPG. She was a rookie with no established build yet back then. Of course senior player like Yusis would suggested her a build that is useful for the guild, can combo with them, and match her style.<br /><br />Talking about build, I found it odd that others thinks summoner is a trash-tier Job because they are frail and useless on their own. It's an MMO with a guild system. It's a team game. People splits into roles. At most it should be a 'too hard to play' job or 'too tedious' job. Not a trash job.BLKCandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06922111252078601670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-1356658502123328892016-08-25T19:36:36.554+07:002016-08-25T19:36:36.554+07:00He melded her character build. That happened back ...He melded her character build. That happened back in the gaming days. Their history wasn't just 10-something days.<br /><br />Yusis went along with this wife-husband thing because he is Yusis, a dense harem protag. (Yusis spoils every girl, no exception(so far)) He thought it was just all fun and game, simply roleplaying. Though, he did has some doubt if Kiyomi is serious or not.<br /><br />Kiyomi is indeed aware that their romance was just her delusion, but the point was she is forcing that role on Yusis. She knows Yusis does not romantically interested in her (yet) nor has any commitment to her, but she still try to enforce their wife-husband relationship.<br /><br />As for offending locals, it doesn't matter if she is a real wife or not or they aware of it or not, but sending a hand off warning on a girl who hasn't made a move on your 'husband' yet can really offend a girl in question. They were discussing business, not flirting. Keep the jealousy in check.BLKCandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06922111252078601670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-81934408613920159322016-08-25T02:34:02.808+07:002016-08-25T02:34:02.808+07:00Dude, she know full well that this is her 'del...Dude, she know full well that this is her 'delusion' or 'fake virtual love'. Yusis is aware, his exact words were 'elaborate farce' or 'self-inflicted illusion'. At least that's what I get from that vague scene in one of the part. If Yusis saw this as a problem he would have stopped spoiling and playing along with her. <br /><br />I think you are reading both characters somewhat wrong especially that 'meld her' part. Beside this is like 10+ days in. <br /><br />Why would Mayana or any other local be offended? And I don't see any 'too damn aggressive' action too. It's not like they know this is role playing. It would just look a normal reaction of a 'wife' from their point of view. <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-64452080021694428732016-08-24T12:20:04.823+07:002016-08-24T12:20:04.823+07:00It's nice knowing a bit more of Kiyomi. So thi...It's nice knowing a bit more of Kiyomi. So this is Kiyomi background. I can understand why she would feel attached with the guild and everything, but she should realize that is romance is only her delusion and she is being forceful.<br /><br />Yusis wasn't romantically interested in her. He wasn't even aware of her condition or really wanted to help her overcome her trauma personally. He just saw her as a new player he can partnered with. He should helps her because she is a rookie in the guild. Plus, she hasn't settle her build yet, so he can meld her into something that's useful to his build or the guild in general. He only saw her quirks as her roleplay habits.<br /><br />He valued her as a player, that's all. They are not dating, not married, and Yusis has no obligation to her. (Nor any girl has to respect her roleplay) Other special attention or hint he gave her wasn't because Yusis interested in her, but it's because he is an archetype harem protag. Like Stella has said - he will get knifed one day.<br /><br />Right now it seems like harmless roleplaying, but it may cause trouble in the future.<br /><br />Like that last meeting, she may offended Mayana by being too damn aggressive in defending her 'husband'. Their position and power is vastly different and any offense won't cause them any problem. But someday, that tendency of her could cause a problem.BLKCandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06922111252078601670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-74878766008709090532016-08-23T22:04:26.526+07:002016-08-23T22:04:26.526+07:00Thanks for the chapter. Side chapters help fleshin...Thanks for the chapter. Side chapters help fleshing out the setting and characters of the story so keep going!<br /><br />P.S. Will the new chapter come some 2 weeks later or will it be sooner because this one is a side chapter?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18358639206193375490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-39410065262529272442016-08-22T09:53:44.890+07:002016-08-22T09:53:44.890+07:00I was wondering why she was running around before,...I was wondering why she was running around before, so sadAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01883692827815242779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-32843583421139947842016-08-22T04:15:39.159+07:002016-08-22T04:15:39.159+07:00Also, for those of you who criticize side stories ...Also, for those of you who criticize side stories like this...<br /><br />*Unknown called*<br />*Answered*<br />"I will find you, and I will kill you."<br /><br />So far I have not seen any. As of 5:15am (GMT+8)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00069068128427943175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-41488513785927343772016-08-22T04:11:56.444+07:002016-08-22T04:11:56.444+07:00Okay, that's gay. Hahaha! Thanks for the chapt...Okay, that's gay. Hahaha! Thanks for the chapter!! I love side stories like this as they give more background to the characters. Also, I love the way you connect the side story to the main story. Like why did she run until her stamina bar depletes?(Because she can feel parts of her body after a long time). Why is she so deeply obsesses with him?(Because he was the one who made her stand back up). So, please do more of this!! But becareful nor to get side track from the main story. Side stories that are useless (doesn't add anything to the main story) should only be done once a volume. 😊Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00069068128427943175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-67264645647005848702016-08-22T04:03:03.219+07:002016-08-22T04:03:03.219+07:00😍😙😘😚😗Yukkuri😗😚😘😙😍😍😙😘😚😗Yukkuri😗😚😘😙😍Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00069068128427943175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-51092304093746686502016-08-21T19:43:59.521+07:002016-08-21T19:43:59.521+07:00Great chapter... but FLOREA!!! Side story of Flore...Great chapter... but FLOREA!!! Side story of Florea pleaseAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-555952528561773822016-08-21T10:29:31.984+07:002016-08-21T10:29:31.984+07:00Danna~
NO one could possibly reprimand you or mad...Danna~<br /><br />NO one could possibly reprimand you or mad at you because of this. You're doing great instead.<br /><br />An implementation side story always reveal the side the main story didn't did it?<br /><br />There's a time when I got hyped over a story, and on a whim, I decide to wrote one (In JPN)...but, still need working at that.<br /><br />Hope I could be a great writer like you....<br /><br />Best regards<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01885955457360060482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-10503294687495668052016-08-21T02:00:59.522+07:002016-08-21T02:00:59.522+07:00Thanks for the chapter Thanks for the chapter Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01027515385794393990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-77001684071365601142016-08-21T00:45:48.419+07:002016-08-21T00:45:48.419+07:00Thank you for the update! I always found her a bit...Thank you for the update! I always found her a bit annoying, someone too RP orientated for her own good, with her clingy wifey behavior lol.<br /><br />But now that some of her history was revealed, I can understand a little bit of why she acts this way, indulging in a world where she is free to be who she wants to be. I may not love her character, but I can look at her with fresh eyes that wont be so judgemental anymore :P I may even grow to like her :D I look forward as always to the next installment!<br /><br />Keep up the good work!Kuq Kuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00016796118840949212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-23695278799929224802016-08-21T00:44:18.371+07:002016-08-21T00:44:18.371+07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Kuq Kuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00016796118840949212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-30625173580201186792016-08-21T00:38:59.229+07:002016-08-21T00:38:59.229+07:00No way I disagree I love getting more insight into...No way I disagree I love getting more insight into the other characters! I understand her a lot more than I did before, she came across as all clingy and a bit suffocating with her RP type character, now I know why shes like that. It also fleshes her out more in relation to Yusis and how she has come to be this way.<br /><br />Im looking forward to the other characters history and what they have to reveal, cant wait :D<br />Kuq Kuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00016796118840949212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-18031114033924305632016-08-20T23:20:53.560+07:002016-08-20T23:20:53.560+07:00No wonder she run until she was exhausted in Chapt...No wonder she run until she was exhausted in Chapter 1 part 4. At first I thought she was panicking. After reading "real life condition" in her profile and the event in Chapter 2 part 3, I thought she might be a lonely hospitalize girl in real life. I am happy my guess end up somewhat right. Her situation is both worst and better than my guess though.<br /><br />Why do you think you will get criticized?<br /><br />Thanks for the chapter by the way.<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-53785465149240984742016-08-20T22:04:31.832+07:002016-08-20T22:04:31.832+07:00Thanks for the chapter.Thanks for the chapter.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18275578556059401574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-38510803884749540072016-08-20T21:55:11.565+07:002016-08-20T21:55:11.565+07:00thank for the chapter.thank for the chapter.taetaetrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10533559511848001484noreply@blogger.com