tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post6168653618039446811..comments2024-03-15T14:23:29.857+07:00Comments on Yukkuri Free Time Literature Service: Our New World - Chapter 2 Part 14Yukkuri Oniisanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09604990645032069309noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-43411003838152745902017-04-18T07:27:38.406+07:002017-04-18T07:27:38.406+07:00How many days is a month?How many days is a month?Azure Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03444379126325077019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-54725770985106771702017-04-05T11:04:19.409+07:002017-04-05T11:04:19.409+07:00Cheers!
by the way, next chapter button shows &quo...Cheers!<br />by the way, next chapter button shows "sorry" page.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02779714756510051343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-18374288052571490992017-02-08T22:44:13.879+07:002017-02-08T22:44:13.879+07:00Considered dead in my bookConsidered dead in my bookAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-65193614902768247752017-02-02T10:24:39.004+07:002017-02-02T10:24:39.004+07:00still waitnig TOT.still waitnig TOT.taetaetrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10533559511848001484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-70905340884814762352017-01-31T05:16:10.689+07:002017-01-31T05:16:10.689+07:00Hey uhmm is this dropped??Hey uhmm is this dropped??WadaWadaahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11034903504708030348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-51058100893950104882017-01-31T05:15:10.654+07:002017-01-31T05:15:10.654+07:00This comment has been removed by the author.WadaWadaahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11034903504708030348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-50134171821399137072017-01-02T17:18:31.937+07:002017-01-02T17:18:31.937+07:00I hope this is not droped!!? So cruel :(I hope this is not droped!!? So cruel :(Lisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04685925810959809861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-9063528276029909082016-11-19T17:04:41.141+07:002016-11-19T17:04:41.141+07:00For all of you, currently (like me) waiting for an...For all of you, currently (like me) waiting for another dose (chapter :P) of Our New World, I'll suggest try reading https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2526075/zero0hero Halkeginia Online - crossover Sword Art Online & Familiar of ZeroMikhailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05284172158967745275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-33690515078851338712016-11-12T10:43:04.142+07:002016-11-12T10:43:04.142+07:00Hey, I was wondering when the next part is coming,...Hey, I was wondering when the next part is coming, pretty sure it's been almost two months since this one was published Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01883692827815242779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-76594169403652072532016-10-31T21:42:02.150+07:002016-10-31T21:42:02.150+07:00Luckily for our protagonists, the standard of the ...Luckily for our protagonists, the standard of the beauty on Neuewelt are not that different than our modern time: <br />ample bosoms (easy breastfeeding), wide hip (easy childbirth), not too skinny, unblemished and soft skin (sign of lack of manual labor --> implies servants --> great wealth), not pale (sign of good health), tidy appearance and combed hair (sign of self-care), and pretty clothes (sign of family wealth).<br />Even rustic rural women do have their 'tricks' to keep themselves.Yukkuri Oniisanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09604990645032069309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-57457021663076164242016-10-31T20:15:09.210+07:002016-10-31T20:15:09.210+07:00Not saying that this world is the same as medieval...Not saying that this world is the same as medieval times, but what you said about Maya is that she was living a rustic life, so her regular beauty routine when she was a noble would be different.<br /><br />But heres the thing, standards of beauty varied back in the day, body shapes, facial features, there were wide varieties of what was desirable that changed over the centuries, <br /><br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RT9FmDBrewA<br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xrp0zJZu0a4<br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pTsX05bsKDA<br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b_x_mhNgbt0<br /><br />Now modern women have a plethora of make up tools to really go all out on making themselves look completely different from their naked face.<br /><br />They have skin products that correct/hide blemishes, access to medical tech to get rid of zits, unwanted fat, etc.<br /><br />Would people of this world care about such things? would they invest that amount of care into a superficial task?<br /><br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i8e5D83P6UI < bit of information as well :D<br />Kuq Kuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00016796118840949212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-21390468627621185182016-09-18T11:36:47.895+07:002016-09-18T11:36:47.895+07:00next pleasenext pleaseRussellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11173401714012841030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-84907334170383773682016-08-31T11:37:39.377+07:002016-08-31T11:37:39.377+07:00Aah ok
Thanks for the explanationAah ok<br />Thanks for the explanationseitorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15678551322825357221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-71331537159954606622016-08-30T05:41:09.017+07:002016-08-30T05:41:09.017+07:00Another good chapter, after several hours finally ...Another good chapter, after several hours finally reached the last one :(. I liked the side story too so will be looking forward for more of these. I also liked the world created, is very detailed in various ways. Wonder if we will see any picture of the characters. Keep the good work. <br />PD, ended here because of Guro's blogGelattohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13899935126168551307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-83937726405595705462016-08-29T00:09:50.494+07:002016-08-29T00:09:50.494+07:00Also I have write the chapter beforehand... As plo...Also I have write the chapter beforehand... As plots here and there... in paper...<br />Then I type them and transformed it into full chapter...Yukkuri Oniisanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09604990645032069309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-24674416618547177122016-08-29T00:08:31.008+07:002016-08-29T00:08:31.008+07:00Ah, you have misunderstand.
The preview is for the...Ah, you have misunderstand.<br />The preview is for the entire last half of Chapter 2.<br />The North and South Arc. <br />Featuring: <br />First Instant Raid (this part and next part)<br />The Battle of Northern Aggression (several part ahead)<br />and the Sarai-Archduchy 'War' (last part)<br /><br />You know how I use Chapter X and Part Y, right?<br />I am not lying though....Yukkuri Oniisanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09604990645032069309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-63461766825229581392016-08-28T21:33:52.572+07:002016-08-28T21:33:52.572+07:00Hei yukku San!! How come the preview in the last c...Hei yukku San!! How come the preview in the last chapter does not match with this chapter.<br />Well anyway Don force yourself to write preview unless youre sure it's going to happen and doesn't limit your ability to write a good Charter.seitorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15678551322825357221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-78804242236653076952016-08-27T17:05:59.288+07:002016-08-27T17:05:59.288+07:00If Kiyomi is World Class Beauty
Mayana is a Countr...If Kiyomi is World Class Beauty<br />Mayana is a Country Class Beauty<br />The other girls and guardian are either between Country to City Class Beauty. Even the girls with most average look: Tsukimi and Mizuki is an idol in their school and local neighborhood and have a face that could be scouted into AKB48 based on their looks alone.<br />If people from NS is in Japan then they will either at Country Class Beauty to City Class Beauty. No one is truly ugly. It was as if all people in NS works in Entertainment World.<br />Normal people from Neuewelt varies from World Class Beauty to 'Beauty only inside their own mind' class. Just like the Earth, but the beauty curve is a bit higher.Yukkuri Oniisanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09604990645032069309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-80119243269685377642016-08-27T16:52:35.510+07:002016-08-27T16:52:35.510+07:00Well Maya in: mixture of dust, soot and blood + pe...Well Maya in: mixture of dust, soot and blood + peasant dresses + disordered hair + menacing looks + long time not having proper skincare<br />and Florea in: clean face + silk clean tidy dress (hooray for enchantments!) + frightened puppy looks + daily grooming with the best ingredients+ being a "Blessed One"<br />Of course is on different tier. Clean girl is prettier anyways.<br />Good looking Maya is good looking, that's the scary parts of women.Yukkuri Oniisanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09604990645032069309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-36877039119430881062016-08-27T14:46:48.755+07:002016-08-27T14:46:48.755+07:00Whoa thx for the quick response :)
Yeah I get tha...Whoa thx for the quick response :)<br /><br />Yeah I get that Maya's pretty, it's just reading this far... I kinda had this image of Kiyomi being in a different league altogether compared to normal prettiness. So Mayana suddenly being compared to Kiyomi equally kinda stuck out as odd for me.<br />Did I get it wrong?<br /><br />Somehow in my mind it goes like this...<br />Kiyomi>Other Duchesses>>Guardian Maids>Normal, good looking people of NS=Ridiculously attractive(by their own standards) Neuwelt natives (Mayana goes here)>Mundanely good looking Neuwelt people>everyone else<br /><br />Even the bandit leader reaction to Florea was way bigger than to Mayana. He was completely taken aback by her when by Yuuto's standards Florea's "just" around a high-spec average Idol level.<br /><br />Tiers are serious business lawl<br />(no, not really :p )rpb2508https://www.blogger.com/profile/17217822286016466590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-53788595653881677282016-08-27T13:45:58.980+07:002016-08-27T13:45:58.980+07:00-Does Elemental Smith Art = Spirit Smith Art used ...-Does Elemental Smith Art = Spirit Smith Art used in previous chapters? What job does the skill "Falling Petals" come from?<br />Smith Tier 1 = Smith (normal non-specialized Smith)<br />Smith Tier 2 = Elemental Smith (Yuuto's Tier 2 specialization)<br />Smith Tier 3 = Spirit Smith (Yuuto's Tier 3 Specialization)<br />Falling Petals is belonged to Sword Draw skill sets of Tier 1 Swordsman.<br />-Was Mayana really actually "that" pretty? Kiyomi is Nation's Top Idol level or something with sublime aura and grace by Yusis's own admission (Twice for emphasis). It just never came up before even during the bandits or other neutral POVs. Good job staying composed after getting stabbed by a half-naked beauty of that level then I guess lol<br />She was indeed pretty. There is a reason why she was the first target for the boss. Also, when she went to the meeting, she had dolled herself, you know, to weaponize her beauty.<br />-How's the average look of the Neuwelt inhabitants that have appeared in the story so far in comparison?<br />More or less same as the Earth. Maya came from good nobility background so she was highly above average. Sefi are also above average (it was the reason why she get chosen as Maya's servant after all), Maya's step sister (Zira) and step cousins (Chiri, Launa) are also above average, because they inherited their grandma gene. This was the reason why Maya and Sefi are 'adopted' as Sanusi's daughter, after all it would be strange if a man have a very beautiful daughter but his other daughter is a 'meh'. <br />-There was an special intelligence unit called M11 mentioned before, how do they function so far without being able to talk in the native languages? Just remote observations or are they still in training?<br />They are like Aliens. They are monitoring you without you knowledge. They observed your behavior, they collect your speech, they took your form and walk right beside you. The truth is out there. In other words, it was a combined long distance and short distance passive observation.<br />-...just one last thing. If at all possible I'd love to see some interactions between Neuwelt natives and the run-of-the-mill Neschwanensee's scholars/knights. But I guess that won't be for a while considering the language barriers.<br />That will be the focus of Chapter 3. We are still in Chapter 2 though...Yukkuri Oniisanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09604990645032069309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-92232931921343099322016-08-27T13:27:09.107+07:002016-08-27T13:27:09.107+07:00Glad to know that Yusis hasn't actually exhaus...Glad to know that Yusis hasn't actually exhausted the guild's stockpile! lol<br />I was really pretty worried in this aspect you know...since the word "restraint" doesn't seem to occur to him when it comes to his prepping (his magitech vehicles obsession and truckloads of arms, potions, and misc consumables) and gifting spree. If I remembered correctly in one of the early chapters he did say he ran out of grade 6 and under materials re-arming and re-supplying the entire Knight's Corps and Militias, guess that didn't include potion ingredients then. <br />Thank God for the existence of renewable resource goldmines in the Instances (though personally I felt the sequence is a bit out of order lol)<br /><br />I suppose I lean more in favor of Momonga's style of "Meta Otherworldly Guild & Resource Management 101" all covert with expenditures kept to the absolute minimum unless renewable but I get where Yusis's coming from with his own approach to Neuschwanensee's own unique circumstances.<br />Differentiation is a good thing imo.<br /><br />A few questions and things that crossed my mind,<br />-Does Elemental Smith Art = Spirit Smith Art used in previous chapters? What job does the skill "Falling Petals" come from?<br />-Was Mayana really actually "that" pretty? Kiyomi is Nation's Top Idol level or something with sublime aura and grace by Yusis's own admission (Twice for emphasis). It just never came up before even during the bandits or other neutral POVs. Good job staying composed after getting stabbed by a half-naked beauty of that level then I guess lol<br />-How's the average look of the Neuwelt inhabitants that have appeared in the story so far in comparison?<br />-There was an special intelligence unit called M11 mentioned before, how do they function so far without being able to talk in the native languages? Just remote observations or are they still in training?<br />-...just one last thing. If at all possible I'd love to see some interactions between Neuwelt natives and the run-of-the-mill Neschwanensee's scholars/knights. But I guess that won't be for a while considering the language barriers.<br /><br />So many other things to ask about the Instance and many other things but I don't want to tempt you into spoiling myself by mistake >__<<br />I'll just wait (impatiently) until after the coast looks relatively clear...<br /><br />Btw if you'd like a little help with Souma or Yuuto's story, I'm still up for it y'know. Translating or editing, could do a little bit of both.rpb2508https://www.blogger.com/profile/17217822286016466590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-49006479308631693742016-08-27T04:38:50.805+07:002016-08-27T04:38:50.805+07:00Ehhh. Wait a minute, wheres the fat noble mentione...Ehhh. Wait a minute, wheres the fat noble mentioned in the last chapter's seitorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15678551322825357221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-8770384438840156222016-08-27T01:40:56.686+07:002016-08-27T01:40:56.686+07:00Theyre not aware of how powerful they are compared...Theyre not aware of how powerful they are compared to the countries surrounding them. Eventually they will find out how OP they really are.<br /><br />Which makes me wonder who will be their nemesis? Will there be another Gamers Guild from their world to compete with? In 500 years no one has been able to breach their walls. Its not clear if there are beings on that world capable of doing it yet didnt try, so many things to consider.<br /><br />In overlord, Momonga was constantly on alert for other players from his world, especially when certain legendary weapons were revealed, it was a logical assumption that if he was there, wouldnt others be here as well? If it became an arms race vs another player guild in this story, wouldnt it be wise to seek out Raid instances for possible weapon upgrades and secure them from being conquered by others?<br /><br />If an arms race is something other countries are willing to invest in, wouldnt Raid instances be a prime source of weaponizing countries to attack them with? Yuuto cant be sure of the kinds of spawns available in this world, if they have things that surpass what they currently have, they have seen some RAHO monsters here, who knows what else came from the game with them?<br /><br />This world has had a few decades to prepare for another invasion attempt, using history as a guide of what not to do. Now that contact with them is viable, there are more ways to win a war than outright confrontation with military might, in the stories that Yukkuri translates Genjitsushugi Yuusha no Oukoku Saikenki Machiavelli is used to great effect, managing to out play others without using much force at all, a bit like the wind vs the sun in getting a man to remove his coat, the wind tries to force it off, but the sun merely made it too hot for the man to keep his coat on. I wonder if brains over brawn will work against them? having gaming knowledge and Real world knowledge they may end up ruling all, they have many advantages, and obviously they would be quite Cautious, but for how long before they realize they hold this world in their grasp? Much to speculate!<br /><br />Thank you for creating such an immersive world! this story is so interesting I cant wait for more, happily refreshing this site endlessly till next update :DKuq Kuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00016796118840949212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1161586047925771025.post-40659839239732278222016-08-26T12:46:17.538+07:002016-08-26T12:46:17.538+07:00Yet still it is the fact that the whole world trie...Yet still it is the fact that the whole world tried to attack them several times. Several decades has passed, so who knows, maybe to prevent another attack, nameless state went full "fk you, enougth of this" and striked :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com