Translator Corner
This is Yukkuri demasu!
As always, Yukkuri is overwhelmed by his RL
work… But now he is free‼!
I am sorry for the belatedness on my part.
Now that my work routine had cleared up (I transferred
to a new Hospital you see) I can resume my usual translation schedule…
Hopefully…
DISCLAIMER: There is no
guarantee that my translation is 100% correct. Please correct me if I was
wrong.
Author-sama:
Dozeumaru(どぜう丸)
Lazy Translator:
Yukkuri Oniisan
Le Editor:
So-Chintzy
Postwar Arc
Chapter 3: The Negotiation C
「Wh-……」(Julius)
Perhaps because my firm rejection
was something unexpected, for a moment Julius was at a loss for words. However,
he immediately spoke out with naked anger plastered on his face
「Bastard[1],
are you insane?! Do you think you can escape unscathed to defy the Humanity
Declaration!」(Julius)
「That
is not something that someone like you can say. You invaded Efrieden’s
territory, and then, when you got invaded in exchange, you started yelling “no border
changes with military power”. Because of that, your reasoning doesn’t make any
sense.」(Souma)
「That
is…… Everything was just the previous Duke Gaius’ arbitrary act-……」(Julius)
「You
also know that those words are just excuses, right?」(Souma)
When I threw the question back at
him, Julius’ words were tightly clogged up.
「……Whatever
you say, it doesn’t change the fact that you are occupying our citizens. I, as
this country ruler, ought to liberate my people.」(Julius)
So he objected. But, liberating
from an occupation, yeah……
「Is
that something that Van’s Citizens desire?」(Souma)
「What?」(Julius)
「Julius-dono,
when you were travelling to this place, didn’t you see how Van’s streets and
buildings looks like?」(Souma)
Julius stared in amazement at my
question, but he immediately replied while glowering at me.
「Van
is a city where I was born. I am more familiar with it than someone like you.」(Julius)
「Is
that so…... Then, what “color” does that Van have right now in your sight?」(Souma)
「Color?
If it’s buildings with distasteful color on their walls or roofs, then I saw
several of them, what of it……」(Julius)
「……
Well I wouldn’t find fault in someone’s sense of art, but Julius-dono, if they
are under an occupation, would the citizens who were struggling under
tyrannical rule paint their walls and roofs so colorfully like that?」(Souma)
Without any antagonism, I
explained in a very kind and detailed manner for Julius.
「If
the despot imposes his power on the citizens, then the citizens wouldn’t do
something that would attract the eyes of the despot, right? Since the citizens
wouldn’t know what kind of calamity would fall upon them if they did any flashy
acts that caught up the despot’s eyes. Therefore, the citizens under a
tyrannical rule wouldn’t speak of their discontent, wouldn’t let their attitudes
show their emotions, and would stow away their true opinions into the deepest
corners of their hearts. Because of this, something like colorfully painting
their walls and roofs would be something that they absolutely wouldn’t do.
Right?」(Souma)
At this point, I momentarily
stopped my words, as I stared directly at Julius’ eyes and continued my
explanation.
「However,
what color did that Van have when you were governing this city?」(Souma)
「!
That is……」(Julius)
Julius hesitated to say. Well, of
course. When I first entered Van, the color that I sensed was “Grey Townscape.”
The buildings that stood in the labyrinth-like unmaintained districts were only
houses with ash grey walls and brown earth roofs without any fragment of individuality.
The uniformity of the color tone, even without any standardization, might be the
fault of the lack of freedom given to the citizens of this city.
「The
Van that I govern right now and the Van that you had ruled before, as expected,
which one that seems to be an “occupied” city?」(Souma)
「Bastard,
are you accusing us of being tyrannical despots!」(Julius)
「It’s
a fact, right? Most of your national budget is poured into military expenses,
right? …… Ah, also for the furnishing of this castle, right? Even though the
tax that the people paid should essentially be used for the Citizen’s welfare, it
wasn’t. Not for maintaining the city, not for maintaining the roads, not for
promoting industry, but all those heavy taxation fees went to the military. Isn’t
that stupid?」(Souma)
「Shut
your mouth up!」(Julius)
「Cease
it, Julius-dono!」(Jeanne)
Jeanne stopped Julius who seemed
to want to approach me. To be stopped no more than a half-step, he gritted his
teeth with frustration. Although they weren’t permitted to carry any weapons into
the audience, if Jeanne hadn’t stopped him, perhaps he would cast a magic spell
at me. If that happens, then we could have attacked Julius under the
justification of self-defense, but…… It is not the time for that.
「Aisha,
you should also release your hand from the hilt.」(Souma)
「……Yes.」(Aisha)
I reminded Aisha, who stood
diagonally behind me while emitting a strong bloodthirst. She replied in the dejected
tone of a child that has just been scolded. Don’t worry Aisha, I didn’t pay any
mind to it. Even if the opponent Julius was acting all high and mighty, I felt safe
since Aisha is protecting me. Then, Jeanne sighed while offering her honest
opinion.
「King
Souma…… I want you to stop inciting Julius-dono.」(Jeanne)
「I am
only telling the truth. An economy is about managing the land and providing
relief to its citizens[2]……
despite that that was the ideal image of a ruler, his governance that was
wasting all the heavy tax for military expenses was clearly tyrannical
despotism.」(Souma)
「Whose
fault was this! You bastards had robbed from us our ancestral lands!」(Julius)
「So,
this again……」(Souma)
Julius repeated his constant
insistence, so I sighed.
「Although
Amidonia’s Royal Family had been yelling revenge against Elfrieden’s Royal
Family at every opportunity, that incident happened 50 years ago, right? Not to
mention you, but Gaius too, are not the people that were directly related to
that event. Additionally, I am only someone who arrived in this world not too
long ago. So, why are you holding a grudge against me so much?」(Souma)
「!
That is,」(Julius)
「Ah, please
leave out killing Gaius and capturing Van. The one who began this in the first place
was your side. After all, if I don’t kill Gaius, then I would have been the one
who was killed.」(Souma)
「Kugh……」(Julius)
「See,
you couldn’t find any words to say, right? You don’t have any reason to resent
me after all.」(Souma)
Or rather…… The one who received the
real grievances was the Kingdom’s side.
「Hakuya.」(Souma)
「Yes,
Your Majesty.」(Hakuya)
When I gave a sign, Hakuya took
out a rolled up paper and handed it over to Julius and Jeanne. What was written
on that paper were several people’s names. After reading it, Jeanne was only
tilting her head in confusion, but Julius became pale.
「This
is…… What does this mean?」(Jeanne)
Jeanne inquired towards Hakuya,
who then replied while making a respectful bow.
「The
names written on this paper are those of the nobles inside the Elfrieden
Kingdom who had been agitated by the Amidonia Dukedom. Among these were the people
who were involved in the failed rebellion during the previous King’s reign. Amidonia
agitated them, kindled insurrection, instigated corruption, and incited a
noncooperative attitude towards the Royal Family.」(Hakuya)
「My,
my……」(Jeanne)
Receiving the cold glance sent by
Jeanne, Julius’ mouth was bound close as he hung his head down. I had Hakuya investigate
about those who instigated the Three Dukes (well, in the end the rebellion failed).
But wow, the shady bunches were here and there. Among the names in the list, I
could see the name of the nobles who had committed corruption, but I also found
the names of the nobles who didn’t participate in the battle and just chose to
wait and see.
「Do
you understand, Jeanne-dono? While pretending to cooperate in the Humanity
Declaration, the Amidonia Dukedom was doing secret maneuvers behind your back.
This is the revenge against the Kingdom that they always talked about.」(Souma)
「That
revenge, too, in the end, is something that they adopted for their own conveniences.」(Hakuya)
As if to continue what Hakuya had
said, I spoke out while glaring at Julius.
「The
country is poor, it’s the Kingdom’s fault. The citizens are hungry, it’s the
Kingdom’s fault. The citizens suffered from hard labor, it’s the Kingdom’s
fault. Heavy taxation not for the citizens’ sake, but for the military, this
too is the Kingdom’s fault.」(Souma)
「……What
do you want to say?」(Julius)
「How
convenient, since if you chant the slogan of revenge, then you can hide your
misgovernment and shepherd the Citizens’ anger towards the Elfrieden Kingdom.」(Souma)
「You!
Bastard!」(Julius)
「Julius-dono!」(Jeanne)
This time, too, Julius tried to
draw near, but Jeanne ‘s loud voice stopped him again. Then, she sent a harsh
stare at my direction.
「King
Souma, I think I had myself clear that I DO NOT want you to continue inciting
him.」(Jeanne)
「……sorry.
But our side ,too, would like for you to understand our irritation towards Amidonia’s
conducts.」(Souma)
「That
is……I can sympathize.」(Jeanne)
「Thank
you. Then, there is a suggestion I want to ask from you.」(Souma)
Well, from now on, this will be
the real deal, and as if to indicate this, I faced the both of them.
「Will
it be acceptable for you to make Julius-dono leave the room?」(Souma)
◇ ◇ ◇
「Who
are you fooling with! Why do I need to leave the discussion for the return of
the capital city of our nation?!」(Julius)
At my sudden proposal, Julius lashed
out with an infuriated expression. I felt that the angry faces of a strikingly handsome
guy was 50% more dreadful than a normal face. If it was the me from before
coming to this world, then I would have been overwhelmed from dread and
wouldn’t say anything. However, up until now, I have met with various scary
people like Gaius and had wagered my life to some degree. Now, I wouldn’t be
disturbed with only this level of intimidation.
「It’s
a simple story. In the first place, there is no reason to do any discussion
with Amidonia.」(Souma)
「Why
is that!」(Julius)
「What
I placed on the negotiation table was for the Empire 『I
want you to recognize Van’s possession』. Conversely, the Empire has the standpoint of not
recognizing border changes due to military power, so they came to negotiate 『I
want Van’s return to Amidonia.』, right? See, in the end, isn’t the negotiation just between
the Kingdom and the Empire?」
Yes, this negotiation, ever since
the beginning, has been a negotiation between the Kingdom and the Empire.
Julius is nothing more than an extra that had been just sticking along
the way. Since his enmity would prevent the negotiations from proceeding
smoothly, it would be really helpful if he left the negotiations. Jeanne also
seems to understand this.
「……Julius-dono.
Would you please leave this matter to me?」(Jeanne)
To which Julius replied.
「Jeanne-dono!?
However,」(Julius)
「If
both sides keep antagonizing each other, the negotiations wouldn’t go anywhere.
Even for the Empire, we don’t want to spend too much time mediating another’s
country war. Since Van would surely return, I want you to entrust the
negotiations to me.」(Jeanne)
「However!
Then, won’t the negotiations would be one-sided!?」(Julius)
「Then,
should the Empire withdraw from the negotiation, so you can conduct the
negotiation by yourself?」(Jeanne)
Julius wanted to keep arguing,
but Jeanne shut him up with her words.
「If I
can be honest, for the current case, the fault lies on Amidonia’s side. We
offered assistance since you are a member nation of the Humanity Declaration,
but if you keep troubling us more than this, then the Empire would have to
withdraw from this case.」(Jeanne)
「Kugh……」(Julius)
Since this was something that his
last ray of hope, the Empire, had said, Julius couldn’t say anything back. After
showing an anguished expression, he replied with a strained voice.
「Van……
You will be able to return it, right?」(Julius)
「I
swear by my sister’s name, Grand Chaos Empire’s Empress Maria Euphoria.」(Jeanne)
「……I
will be glad to entrust this matter to you.」(Julius)
After Julius said this, while
lowering his head and moving to leave the room, he glared towards my direction,
and only then, did he exit the audience room. After watching him leave, I and
Jeanne then sighed together.
「……Sorry
for my idiot member nation.」(Jeanne)
「Nah,
it’s me who should be the one who’s sorry that our idiot neighbor is bothering
you.」(Souma)
We looked at each other and
laughed. The serious atmosphere had disappeared, but it didn’t change the fact that
the atmosphere was tense. No, rather, it could be said that the tension was higher
than before. Though I heard about this later, Liscia, who was watching from beside
me from the time that Julius was in the room to up until he left, had her heart
fluttering rapidly. Well…… For both the Elfrieden Kingdom and the Grand Chaos
Empire, this negotiation would decide “what would happen from now on” in just a
few moments, so her nervousness was understandable.
☾☽☾☽☾☽☾☽☾☽☾☽☾☽☾☽☾☽☾☽
The true negotiations
finally can begin!
It’s refreshing somehow
that the Empire is not the standard evil empire commonly found in the fiction.
Also if this is Chinese
web-novel, Julius would have been coughing out blood and Jeanne would be confused
whether she should cry or laughing. Also the Empire would be a rude and discourteous,
after all the stronger Top Tier Sect like the Empire wouldn’t bat any eyelashes
for a Middle Tier Sect like the Kingdom.
[1] Kisama 貴様. For those who didn’t know this is a very rude
Japanese way to say “You”. Almost every you that Julius use for Souma is using
Kisama. While Souma refer to Julius with a rather polite you, “Kiden” 貴殿.
[2] CULTURAL
NOTES:
The original RAW words are: 経世済民 Keiseisaimin (Keisei:government-Saimin:citizen relief). This is
taken from the line “經世濟俗” that Ge Hong (葛洪283-364), a scholar who served as a government
official in the Eastern Jin Dynasty (東晋 317-420),
used it in his book “Bao Puzi” (抱朴子, which is his pen name, too). Then during the
Sui Dynasty the lines were used by several writers which mimicked by the next
writers and so on. All have the meanings of a principle of an ideal good
ethical (Confucian) governance.
During the Bakumatsu period, when exchange with
foreign nations introduced new concepts to the Japanese, to explain the concept
of ECONOMY (oikosnomos) and political economics, the Japanese used the word 経済 (keizai) that
was taken from 経世済民 principle.
Eventually the word 経済 was also exported from Japanese into Chinese as
经济 and from China to all Sinosphere cultures as the word
for economy.
So an economy also have an
implicit about good and ethical governance.
「Van is a city where I was born. I am more familiar with it than someone like you.」(Souma)
ReplyDelete「Is that so…... Then, what “color” does that Van have right now in your sight?」(Julius)
Ga kebalik gan?
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DeleteYang ngomong maksutnya, kayanya yang atas julius baru yang bawah souma ya?
DeleteBtw thanks for chapter
Lol, did u even read properly ?
Deletei mean, properly ?
Yay, just im time and !!
ReplyDeletethank you for the chapter XD
ReplyDeleteThank you for your hard work
ReplyDeleteThanks for the new chapter!
ReplyDeleteGguuuhh~
ReplyDeleteI want to see what happen next.. damn cliff.
LOLed so hard at the red word in bottom of the chapter
ReplyDeleteThanks for the chapter
Liscia for Waifu Number 1 !!
#TeamLiscia
So long.... tnx for the chap
ReplyDeletefufufu, everyone dances in the hand of souma hand. its being a long time since i read intellectual negotiating scene on light novel. this is amazing, thank you as always
ReplyDeletefiiinallly!
ReplyDeletethank's yukuri sama... :')
Thanks also
ReplyDeleteGreat job with the final words.
Thanks for the chapter.
ReplyDeleteThe empire is not evil... even thought there is "Chaos" word in the name of empire... How come the the empire name attached word "chaos" there?
ReplyDeleteWell, nevermind, i just want to laugh that Julius is being ridiculed after leaving the negotiation room.
poor him.
They put chaos there because the founder has a chuunibyou.
Delete"Also if this is Chinese web-novel, Julius would have been coughing out blood and Jeanne would be confused whether she should cry or laughing. Also the Empire would be a rude and discourteous, after all the stronger Top Tier Sect like the Empire wouldn’t bat any eyelashes for a Middle Tier Sect like the Kingdom."
ReplyDeleteLOL TL that sounded terrible racist and ill-informed (japanese descent?? ----> see what i did there :) ) you are mixing wuxia/xanxia with evry type of chinese web novel for real?? check novelupdates there are some real good ones without the "i murder you just because..."
So, 90% of Chinese webnovels give the rest a bad name, right?
DeleteOk i´m gona write it simple for you because english is not my first language: wuxia/xianxia novels is a type of novel, that is not the only type of novel chinese write, it´s like saying that hentai novels is the only thing japanese do....
DeleteBTW: if you need an example read "Law of the Devil" it´s a medieval/fantasy chinese novel.....
DeleteWe are supposed to be talking about the same genre though. If this was a Chinese novel featuring characters including Souma, Julius, and Jeanne, it's obviously going to be wuxia/xianxia, so the statement is still correct.
DeleteOMG @M.A.D stop ¡slapping your face! :), i was talking over the same genre "MEDIEVAL / FANTASY" that´s why "Law of the Devil", is so good to comparison, if you need more Examples of the same GENRE with Kindom Building check, Release that Witch, The Amber Sword, Hail the King and Mad God, all good chinese novels.....that are not wuxia/xianxia
DeleteWell... i just put the red closing comment, just because.
DeleteSince the current translated Chinese web novel are mostly xianxia, I think I read too much blood coughing scene......
Of course there are non-xianxia Chinese novels (I read RTD), however even in this novels there is blood coughing too (as figurative way of speak).
About rude and haughty powerful than MC antagonist, it's one of Chinese staple antagonist character, you can find this character in many Chinese story, not necesarilly xianxia.
weedisdaboss I'm not sure about "Law of the Devil" ,I see some of the comment show a lot of bad point about it make me wondering that I should read it ,like "at chapter ~24-69 are horrible" or "Ill have you know this MC is very weak. Its been over 173 chapters and he still hasn't learned anything!" ,also the second comment on the novelupdates,so can you tell me ?
Deleteand also for "Hail the King" ,it look good but there while a lot of bad point I'm worried too,like :
Delete_ It wad good in the beginning, but after ~100, it's "another xianxia"...mediocre xianxia.
[Mode] game elements-OFF
[Mode] romance-OFF
[Mode] king-OFF
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[Mode] handsome,cool,smart,cunning,invincible,brave,awesome HOLY MC - on
[Mode] arrogant villains-ON
[Mode] idiotic world-ON
[Mode] plot armor-ON
This novel is not about King, it's about gang boss. All what he did for kingdom - mass slaughters and strengthened his force. Ch.265.
Villain:"on your knees!"→MC:"ha-ha"→Massacre→Hail the king→Diablo chapter→villain→brave MC→massacre→Hail the king→villain...→HAIL
Also that annoying 2nd harem girl. Author can't find normal role for her, she is useless, but she is everywhere! Every ch author notice that girl. Why?"
so do it worth to read ? ,i'm really like the progress type like "Building " and "technology"
Sorry for the late replay, i'm not sure over Heil the king (tl is at chapter 94) but law of the devil is totally worth your time! Duwei is not magic OP but he is smart and building up his territory, most people hate it for the MC using known names for his stuff, he changed the name of the captain in charge of his fleet to sparow and stuff like that, also there is another good novel with kingdom building "Tales of Reincarnated Lord"
Deletethank for answer my question :3 ,and that "Tales of Reincarnated Lord" look very good ,and btw there is a good Light novel that I found here,it very good and the MC is very smart and realistic (but not necessary that he have to be evil)
Deletehttp://yukkuri-literature-service.blogspot.com/p/genjitsushugisha-no-oukoku-kaizouki.html"
Thankee very much for the chapter yukkuri oniisan :3
ReplyDeleteAnd idd teamLiscia xD
Thanks for the chapter
ReplyDeleteMaan, this is gold
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next chapter
Thank you very much for the chapter! Best relief after work :)
ReplyDeleteMoar.....
ReplyDeleteMore or the train to busan zombies are coming to you.....
if this was a CN, souma would be like "Why do you like to strike your own face so much?
ReplyDeleteIt is fun?"
and the empire be like "Give me some face"
Julius * coughing blood*: I YOUR FATHER WILL KILL YOU!
hauhauhua totally right xD
DeleteThanks for the chapter
ReplyDeletenuuuuuuuuuoooooooooo
ReplyDeletei wants moa!!!
Thanks for the chapter~
I guess Jeanne i gonna have to take back her words. Of giving away Van.
Thanks for the chapter! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the chapter <3
ReplyDelete"Also if this is Chinese web-novel, Julius would have been coughing out blood and Jeanne would be confused whether she should cry or laughing. Also the Empire would be a rude and discourteous, after all the stronger Top Tier Sect like the Empire wouldn’t bat any eyelashes for a Middle Tier Sect like the Kingdom."
ReplyDeleteI laughed so hard I died
"Also if this is Chinese web-novel, Julius would have been coughing out blood and Jeanne would be confused whether she should cry or laughing. Also the Empire would be a rude and discourteous, after all the stronger Top Tier Sect like the Empire wouldn’t bat any eyelashes for a Middle Tier Sect like the Kingdom."
ReplyDeleteI laughed so hard I died
you're courting death yukkuri-san lol... why do they always cough blood?
ReplyDelete物語を訳してくれて,本当にありがとうございます!
ReplyDeleteゆっくりー旦那最高!
エルフリーデン最高!
Wanted to say that a long time ago....
Thanks for the chapter...
ReplyDeleteArigatou!nii-san.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the chapter
ReplyDeleteThe comparison with the chinese novel was so funny xD
ReplyDeleteentire month without "Takarakuji de 40 oku atattanda kedo isekai ni ijuusuru" :(
ReplyDelete「If I can be honest, for the current case, the fault lies on Amidonia’s side. We offered assistance since you are a member nation of the Humanity Declaration, but if you keep troubling us more than this, then the Empire would have to withdraw from this case.」
ReplyDeleteInto simple nowadays terms.
"Even we charity workers have a level of tolerance for bullshit. Anymore, and we'll stop helping you."
Thank you very much!
ReplyDeleteThe fact that I cant use firefox read or readability with this chapter is infuriating... What's up with such pointless struggle against reader that preffer other fonts and background color?
ReplyDeleteMy man Thank you very much for the chapter. keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletethat comparison with Chinese novel, I don't know whether I should cry or laugh XD
ReplyDelete